Saturday, December 31, 2011

Six Sunday--Lost in New Falls


HAPPY NEW YEAR! Now that I got that out, thanks to all who made 2011 a fantastic year for me by stopping by and commenting here and sharing such incredible talent week after week.  Hope 2012 blesses you all!


We're still in New Falls, Tennessee with Sara Delaney and Sheriff Quentin Taylor.  Sara has just reported a burglary during which her laptop was stolen (EEK!).  She's just finished explaining she's also missing her underwear and has her fingers crossed that the good sheriff won't recognize her.  But that's not how conflict works.  Here is another six from Lost in New Falls:


         
             “Sara Delaney? Your name is Sara?”

             Here it comes. “Yes.”

             He studied her again, disbelief apparent in his golden eyes. If he was waiting for her to confirm they knew each other, they’d be standing here until the cedar smell wore off the log walls around them.


Read more Six Sentence Sundays here, or sign up to participate next week.

Happy Writing!

Cherie

Into the Fire Amazon BuyLink: http://tinyurl.com/3f7vfnp
Into the Fire TWRP BuyLink: http://tinyurl.com/3mfn3zj

Facebook– http://on.fb.me/qRl1lD
Twitter— http://twitter.com/cheriemarks

13 comments:

Angela Guillaume said...

oooh, very well written, flows, and makes one want to read more. Great job, and best wishes for the new year to you, too! x

Joanne Stewart said...

Oohhh, very intriguing. I'm dying to know what happened that she doesn't want him to remember! Great six!

Skye Warren said...

Oh, nice. She sounds like a strong heroine.

Zee Monodee said...

Lol. Gotta admire that girl's spirit! :)

Jessica Subject said...

Very cute! I'm intrigued by their past.

All the best in 2012! :)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Clever lines. Love the cedar smell wearing off the walls!

Cara Bristol said...

Unique and descriptive. Well done.

angelaquarles.com said...

Love her voice, great 6!

Cherie Marks said...

Thanks, ladies, for the very appreciated comments. Hope your first day of the new year has been fantabulous.

Vivien Dean said...

Love the humor in this. Thanks for sharing!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

I love your voice in this. Her humiliation comes through loud and clear.

sue said...

Happy New Year! I just want to catch up with y'all as soon as I can
till the smell wore off - lol - so? how do they know each other???

Jayel Kaye said...

smart analogy