Sunday, November 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday--Lost in New Falls

In last week's post, Sara Delaney exemplified every writer's worst nightmare--she'd lost all her written work.  We pick up as a deputy asks if she's noticed anything else missing.


She unfolded her hands from her mouth and nodded. She cleared her throat and bit her lip. It was a little embarrassing. “An alarm clock, a pillow, and…uh, well, whoever it was, cleared out my underwear drawer.”

 "You had valuables hidden there?”

If only.


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Cherie
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17 comments:

Angela Guillaume said...

Oh my, what a pickle! I can't wait to read more about this...great six! Had me hooked.

christine warner said...

Great six...love that internal at the end.

Megan Johns said...

Nice six, Cherie
Best wishes

veronicascott said...

Enjoyed the further details - uh oh, missing underwear! Hopefully it was frilly! Excellent excerpt as always.

Dee Carney said...

Heehee! I have a feeling what else might have gone missing. ;)

sue said...

yes that is embarassing - I noticed two sentences starting with "she". Has the snippet been edited from the original? Can't wait to see the next move.

carrieannebrownian said...

Great six. I wonder what else exactly has gone missing.

Zee Monodee said...

Lol - what about her lingerie? Not valuable? :) Great six, as always

Cassidy McKay said...

Lol... sexy! Love it.

Meg Maguire said...

A panty bandit!!! Insult to injury.

Ruthie said...

Ha! That's really fun. "If only."

Stephanie Draven said...

The narrative voice on this is sharp. Love it.

Alix said...

Great six! and I agree the voice is perfect.

Sarah Grimm said...

Great six! "If only."

Taryn Kincaid said...

Cute!

Vivien Dean said...

Good use of humor in the voice here. Thanks for sharing!

Xandra James said...

Ooh intriguing - like ya six! ;)