
"It’s like you disappeared.”
His lowered lids widened, and the surprise on his face threw her for a moment. But it was quickly replaced with a fierce anger as he focused on someone or something behind her. “I did come for you, Shyann. I’ll always come for you.”
When his gaze lit on her again, his eyes softened, and he relaxed his arms, brushing a knuckle over one of her cheeks.
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Cherie Marks
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Into the Fire available from The Wild Rose Press, October 5, 2011
24 comments:
This one sounds so good! Definitely want to know more.
Ah... so she's mistaken. Great six, Cherie! Looking forward to reading the book!
Wonderful emotion.
I'm a sucker for those tender gestures. Great emotion and great six.
Fantastic six, I love the comparison of his reactions to her and behind her.
emotional six :-)
I really like the reality show theme. Looking forward to this one.
Love the six!
Oh, how sweet!
Love the tension between them!
I agree with Zee, great tension building between these two.
A very sweet moment, but yes, I sense the tension as well.
I LOVE the premise of this book! :)
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS
*raises eyebrow* Sounds like Shyann owes him an apology. The tension is awesome. I'm excited to read the whole thing!
Oh, love the double entendre--and wonder who is standing behind her overhearing. Great Six! Congrats on the upcoming release!
The way his attention shifts is incredibly intriguing! Dying to know that he was thinking in that moment.
I liked the tension between them.
I'm wondering what's behind her capturing his interest. Great intriguing six.
Congrats on your upcoming release!
Great tension. Great Six. :)
Congrats on the upcoming release of your book! Very exciting. Love the premise of your story...sounds like it'll be a fun read:)
great emotional six
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Great premise! Good tension!
Great emotion!!
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