Sunday, September 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday--Into The Fire

Into the Fire's release date is so close. October 5, 2011 will be here before I know it. Until then, I hope to tempt readers with excerpts from this story about what happens when two chefs with a romantic past go head to head on a reality show. In this scene, Shyann gets an opportunity to confront Luke, but his reaction isn't what she expects.


"It’s like you disappeared.”
His lowered lids widened, and the surprise on his face threw her for a moment. But it was quickly replaced with a fierce anger as he focused on someone or something behind her. “I did come for you, Shyann. I’ll always come for you.”
When his gaze lit on her again, his eyes softened, and he relaxed his arms, brushing a knuckle over one of her cheeks.


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Cherie Marks
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Into the Fire available from The Wild Rose Press, October 5, 2011

24 comments:

Sarah Grimm said...

This one sounds so good! Definitely want to know more.

Amy said...

Ah... so she's mistaken. Great six, Cherie! Looking forward to reading the book!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Wonderful emotion.

Sondra said...

I'm a sucker for those tender gestures. Great emotion and great six.

Alix said...

Fantastic six, I love the comparison of his reactions to her and behind her.

Sandra Sookoo said...

emotional six :-)

Cara Bristol said...

I really like the reality show theme. Looking forward to this one.

Kellie Kamryn said...

Love the six!

Dee Carney said...

Oh, how sweet!

Zee Monodee said...

Love the tension between them!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

I agree with Zee, great tension building between these two.

Jessica Subject said...

A very sweet moment, but yes, I sense the tension as well.

xakara said...

I LOVE the premise of this book! :)

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

lexcade said...

*raises eyebrow* Sounds like Shyann owes him an apology. The tension is awesome. I'm excited to read the whole thing!

Kallypso Masters said...

Oh, love the double entendre--and wonder who is standing behind her overhearing. Great Six! Congrats on the upcoming release!

Meg Maguire said...

The way his attention shifts is incredibly intriguing! Dying to know that he was thinking in that moment.

Elaine Cantrell said...

I liked the tension between them.

Gem Sivad said...

I'm wondering what's behind her capturing his interest. Great intriguing six.

Amy Ruttan said...

Congrats on your upcoming release!

Great tension. Great Six. :)

Christine Warner said...

Congrats on the upcoming release of your book! Very exciting. Love the premise of your story...sounds like it'll be a fun read:)

Kharisma Rhayne said...

great emotional six

Cherie Marks said...

Thanks for those who come back again and again! I so appreciate your comments. They truly make my day.

Laura Kaye said...

Great premise! Good tension!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Great emotion!!